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In the game of Fruits Basket,
Everyone must choose
The name of a fruit in the basket.
There was no way to lose.

All the fruits were taken,
And then it was my turn.
I was named a riceball,
And that was when I learned.

No one liked me,
I was a thorn in their side.
They said it wasn't true,
But I knew they had lied.

In a fruit basket,
There is never a riceball.
That's why it was my new name,
Because I wasn't loved at all.

I pretended not to care,
And I didn't cause a racket.
But I lost my heart and soul,
In the game of Fruits Basket.
:iconarisadonna:
I wrote this after I first read "Fruits Basket". I think I wrote it some time last summer. It's not that great, but I was in the car one day while my mom left to the store, so I decided to write it.

Fruits Basket © Natsuki Takaya
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Mood: Love ~AsianOne99 Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it. It's so sad though.
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~KiddArtist Apr 24, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I have a question, how do you upload a piece of writing? Do just choose the file with the writing you want to upload instead of a picture?
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~ILOVEMONKEYS123 Mar 31, 2012  Student General Artist
i <3 FB
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Mood: Joy ~Blackbloodrose1 Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Nice poem I LOVE how you wrote it a Toru because its sweet and sad in a way. The reason why is its true. Toru was the riceball and it was never called when they played. Until the end of the anime seiris.
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~shadow-and-cynder Apr 30, 2011  Student Digital Artist
very nice
sad... but nice
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:iconrogue-tarochy:
it's beautiful
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:iconnoahfan736:
are yous CRAZY?! this was absolutly wonderful! It really calls out, and shows how Tohru feels. Yous are a true poet. Bravo.
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:iconsubaru29:
that is so tohru!!!!!!!!!
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:iconshe-procrastinator:
Sad. I liked it. Although, there were a few lines where you squashed in too many syllables. You should try make it so the lines don't sound awkward so that it sounds even better when it's being read out. Very good job though.
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:iconseagion:
aww makes me sad
but happy cos its good
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